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They don't understand
That their jokes hurt
I'm different from them
That's all they see
They hide behind their insults
Their labels cut like razors
If my mind was a body
I would have bled to death by now
But I am strong
I won't let it bother me
Let them not understand
I am just me
And I will never change
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This is one of my favorite poems I have written.

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:iconexcel92:
Your poems have deep emotional meaning behind them...which makes them good. I think you should try writing out of free verse because I think that you are certainly capable of throwing in rhythm and rhyme with your emotions. Not to say that there's anything wrong with writing poems in free verse...as its style was invented for a reason, I just personally am more impressed with rhythm and rhyme.
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I think some of my poems would be considered out of free verse.
But I hate poems that rhyme adtuff cause I awlays read them sing-songy......But I think I may try it, maybe rewrite some of my poems.
I always put meaning behind my poems. It's cool you notice^^

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:iconshiznat51:
i know just what you mean
:iconsammyo41107:
Yeah. I think there may have been a more explict version but I am pretty sure I destroied it.

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:iconriceballhikaru:
This was simply amazing. I'm thoroughly impressed with your poem-writing abilities.

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:iconsammyo41107:
Thankies Emiwy~
And nice job making it sound all formally and stuff;3

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Death is waiting.....You should hurry and do something with your life!

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:iconriceballhikaru:
;3 Bwahaha.

Not sure why I'm laughing evilly...

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Do the impossible, break the unbreakable
Raw raw, fight da powa
:iconsammyo41107:
>__< GET BETTER! QUIT BEING SICK!

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You shouldn't click this if you want to keep you soul----->[link]

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